That's
it. I've died. I can see in "flash-backs" everything I've done wrong
throughout my life. "I'm definitively going to hell" I thought.
It kind of looks like a red cave where everyone laughs
but you can't. I saw they play jokes on the noobies. I wonder what they're
going to do to me... A kind of flying skinny pig comes to me and gives me a
shampoo. "Thanks" I
say. I'm bald as a bowling ball. I don't know if the worse thing in hell is
that they made fun of me or that the joke wasn't even funny...

What a good one! Quite funny and it has a good unexpected ending.
ReplyDeleteI really like it! It is very original. When the pig give you the shampoo and you say you are bald I laugh so it is a funny story. I like the last sentence when you explain that you don´t know what is the worse thing in hell . Mainly when you say that the joke wasn´t funny hahaha! Of course it has an unexpected ending! Good job!
ReplyDeleteFunny in a surreal kind of way. If that's humor in Hell, I have to say I like it. Avoid the word "nice" in the title, though.
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