It was 2098. Teachers were absolutely irritated with
some children. I was working at The Torment School. Children there were rude, impolite,
lazy, disrespectful… definitely, spoilt children!
We had an idea. We went to excursion- To HELL! There
they’ll be punished with hard tasks as mopping, sweeping or simply, be quiet!
When the time had finished, my pupils didn’t want to
go back.
They had been enjoying a head massage with
delicious fragrant shampoo. Now they had all they wanted, two big devil’s
horns!
I like it!! Very original and very fun. What I really like is that the teacher is very happy because she wanted the children to be punished and at the end it is the opposite. They are rewarded due to their horrible behaviour. Very original and unexpected ending. GOOD JOB :)
ReplyDeleteGreat story!! it's very original and I like how you describe it using enumeration!! It's a good one with and unexpected ending!! Well done!! ;)
ReplyDeleteSara